But it seems like the comments I have garnered is way different

Since the last round when yang yi sent back the edited copy and nat said that the poems were basically too abstract, this time round, I have tried my best to make it more understandable

This time round, Kimberly says that its too obvious in a way and kuan yuan says its abstract

I guess what ruide said its true, different people would have different feelings towards the same piece of writing.i guess that’s pretty much true.

Since, I have started to write graded pieces or for the compilation of the portfolio, the passion I have for the writing and the fun I actually derived seems to be diminishing fast. It now seems more like a chore due to the stress and the lack of inspiration since my brain has been milked dry, just like a goat’s udder.(sorry for the weird comparison)

Sometimes, what I write don’t seem to be what I want to express and I tend to get fed up. Or I might already be thinking and developing the next part of the story while im stuck writing the initial part since our brain obviously thinks faster than the pen in the hand can possibly write, making the writing process mundane since its slowing down my thought process, somewhat like a liability to me. PHOOEYL

Today, okay yesterday considering its now 12.40am-time check!, was considerably unproductive. I didn’t do much considering that every time I took work out to do, I knock out on my desk and then flop onto my bed and sleep away.Okay, huiwen, you have been lazy this holiday so please buck up and get some work done before you realized that the holidays is gone.